Gary G
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Not much that I can add!
Once Vianney has opined, I don't believe that anyone will care too much what Gary thinks 
But here goes anyway
I like it. As context, I am a sucker for both skeletons and asymmetric dials, so this one is a natural for me. I also like the way that one of the bridges extending from the barrel is shaped like a pointed hand. All in all I much prefer this to your first effort and think that it shows real progress.
Keep them coming! I am attending a one hour finishing class at VC next week so perhaps will be able to take over engraving duties for you
All the best,
Gary G