Watch poem written by an Artificial Intelligence

Dec 09, 2022,15:25 PM
 

So it's Friday evening and naturally my mind turns to poetry. Of course, what else?


I asked the AI from OpenAi (the new AI machine everyone is talking about) to write "a poem about watches" and it came up with the below.

Overall pretty good! Unless intentional, there are some repetitions and non-sensical elements, but also some very good lines!

Love the verse: "but memories are kept, of days and years within the depths of a wristwatch's gears" !

Enjoy and happy weekend!


Time ticks ever onward The beat of the clock never stops The hands of the watch move round A reminder of time that never pauses As it ticks by, each hour is filled The moments that pass can never be re-filled But memories are kept, of days and years Within the depths of a wristwatch's gears A lifetime of love and sorrow Can be seen in its face that time has borrowed The watch is a symbol of life's journey Through life's hours, it keeps its story





fixed the title
This message has been edited by cazalea on 2022-12-09 15:32:31

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SKYNET is not self-conscious... yet

 
 By: RayStantzPhD : December 9th, 2022-15:36
The two lines you recited are pretty good though

Better than I could do 🤷‍♂️

 
 By: TeutonicCarFan : December 9th, 2022-15:39

you call that a rhyme scheme?

 
 By: blau : December 9th, 2022-15:49
One stanza of blank verse and then two stanzas of AABB?? pshaw, 'intelligence'!

Sorry, I don’t read anything remarkable, just a sum of words, that I can probably put together myself after a bottle of wine;)

 
 By: ZSHSZ : December 9th, 2022-15:57
But I’m happy reading this, because if that’s the AI’s level we’re safe for a little while )) Have a great weekend!🥂

Challenge accepted!

 
 By: Epilogue : December 9th, 2022-17:45

I agree with some of the comments above.

 
 By: Ruffian : December 10th, 2022-01:44
Not very good. Clichés and tropes galore.