But I don't quite like the date, and find it quite useless, just as in other brands. So I will get rid of it, in an academic design discussion.
Your version vary only slightly from the original, and the only visible difference is at 6 o'clock, where the scale rail is complete versus the cut off from the original. Guess I like that.
But I disagree with your thesis that this watch is "cluttered and a bit lost". The single sub dial is just ABSOBLOODILUTELY BRILLIANT!!! In fact, it's just the opposite of what you said...it actually reduces dial clutter!! Pother chronos have got 2-3 sub dials just to tell same info. The dual use of the counter is just another master stroke by Patek.
Best,
Horo